- Dolph - why IS he on RPIT? And, I get the angry Dolph thing in later books, but it's sad.
- For that matter, what about Clive Perry - the polite policeman - she references not knowing why he's there...as nosy and as blunt as Anita is, why not just ask? or - as seems more to the point, I'd love to know.
- How DID Bert hear about Anita and recruit her? (she says she doesn't wonder...bully for her :))
- Anita speaks of Grandma Flores as, present tense, 'is interesting' in The Laughing Corpse (even though all connection with her is in past tense language) ...so why not go to her when all the metaphysical stuff kicks up? Especially since what Anita is becoming all seems to be what the grandmother feared. She's clearly got questions...why not ask?
- all of a sudden, in one of the later books, it mentions that there was an office revolt and that all the animators are partners, rather than employees, now - did I miss a book? 'Cause I don't remember anything about how that came about...just that I'm now being informed of it (and subsequent books mention that change as well - as if a reminder of a previous story)
- sex is good, I'm not knocking it, and I don't even mind the edge that the author began with, but it seems that the scenes have just gotten a bit out of hand - jumped the shark is, I believe, an acceptable term, or we could just call them gratuitous and be done with it
- in the later books, with the exception of Micah, where's the mystery and zombie raising? The police interaction and the zombie raising make good stories and give Anita her own personality and character balance to the vampire world which is overwhelming who her character started out being. Now, I know that characters, like people, evolve, but this part of what makes her such an interesting character - her on-edge-ness about the crimes she has to solve. I have to say though, that the conflict between Anita and Dolph is pretty darn real - painful, but real.
- 'alright' is just annoying.
Oh - and after reading the first 8 (yes - I did read 15 of them in a matter of months), I wanted to call the publishing company up and offer my services as proofreader (no reflection on the author). The publisher missed a lot of typos in their copies of the text. This is picky details I know...but they were noticeable.
Ok...that's it for now...I have more questions so I'll add to this later.
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